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01 August, 2020

Jade Maiden 1.5

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[continuing chapter 1]

For a moment, stopping just beside the doorway, Wen stopped and looked back to the fighting.  The rebel appeared to be enjoying himself, bellowing like an ox as he tossed or kicked away assailants.  It was no wonder all eyes were on him and nobody paid the slightest attention to Wen Xia.  Which was just the way it ought to be, as far as Wen Xia was concerned.

"Are you going to just stand there, gawking like some idiot up-country peasant?"  Number One Grandfather raised a spectral hand to strike at his head, but held back when Wen waved the flaming broom at him.  Which was absurd, given that Number One Grandfather wasn't in any state of vulnerability to fire.  Perhaps spirits occasionally forgot themselves.


"Thank you for your help, Grandfather," Wen said.  "But I think I'm the best judge now of how to save myself."  Taking a deep breath, he dashed out into the courtyard.  As soon as he was outside he began waving the broom and shouting, "Fire!  Fire!  The magistrate's chambers are on fire!"  This was probably unnecessary, given the smoke that was by now billowing from the doorway, but Wen hoped it would help to spread a little bit of panic, to say nothing of dissuading listeners from paying too much attention to where Wen was going as he shouted his alarm.

The tribunal was situated on one of the hills above the capital city, and as Wen emerged through the front gate, continuing to play the helpful citizen, he could see the entirety of the city spread below him.  Měijing was built on a series of low, gently rolling hills that descended from a plateau down to the harbor, and atop each hill was a series of mansions, each surrounded by the green of trees and shrubs that indicated a perfectly proportioned and positioned garden.  In the valleys between the hills lived the grain-merchants and cloth traders—the higher up your valley the more money you had loaned to aristocrats and therefore the more socially respectable you were, at least within the highly disreputable merchant class.  And down at the bottom, around the harbor, lived the poor whose work made Měijing run, and whose poverty made them more or less immune to the sort of business Wen Xia had been indulging in lately.

Beyond the harbor, and a possible aid to his escape, was the warm blue-green Eastern Sea.  Though of course in Fusang it should by rights be called the Western Sea, since China was beyond the setting sun from this colony.  Only the rigid strictures of Confucianism would force an entire nation to insist that west was east.

Wen's preference was to look to the harbor as a means of leaving the capital.  There were always coastal traders in port, and Father's sad attempts to make a living by fishing had at least ensured that his son had developed good sea legs and some facility with the duties required on the smaller sorts of ships.  This morning, though, the only craft visible were a brace of sea falcons, small fighting ships in the service of the Ming.  No point in trying to sign on to one of those.

So it was to the eastern hills, then, that he'd have to turn.  There were native villages inland, mixed with farming towns and the manors of huge estates, and perhaps by making his way through the hills he could get to the north, to the frontier.

After that, who knew what would happen?  Walking briskly down the road to where he could turn onto the prince's High Road, Wen tried to think about what life would be like on the northern frontier.  There was plenty of gold in the hills around Jīn-sè Mèn—whose name, after all, meant City of the Gate of Gold—but Wen wasn't really interested in a life of mining.  He'd had more than enough of scratching in the earth for a living, and if anything mining threatened to be worse than farming.  He could read and write, but studying for exams wasn't an option, either: the civil service exams were a ludicrous matter of parroting what generations of sages had to say, not of establishing one's own ability to think or to process ideas.  He had seen what studying for exams had done to his father, and nothing more on that subject need be shown to him.

So what should he do?  Theft was the obvious answer, had been for the past year or so, but—as this morning had shown—thievery in large cities carried considerable risks; and where there were no risks to speak of, there was nothing worth stealing either.  There was no more point in stealing from peasants than there was in stealing from the poor of Měijing; for one thing they had little of interest, and for another Wen had lived like a peasant for long enough that he had developed a hearty dislike for those who would take what little those people had.

He was walking, aware that as the extent of his dilemma had occurred to him his pace had decreased, when he heard the drum-beat of hooves behind him.  Cursing himself for a daydreaming idiot, Wen was looking for a hedge into which he could dive when he suddenly found himself airborne.  When he saw the giant hand and arm wrapped around his midriff he knew what had happened.

So when Chin Gwai shouted, "I'm glad to see that we're both going the same way!" Wen was able to reply, with a calm he didn't feel:


"What took you so long?"

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