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23 November, 2020

Jade Maiden 10.5

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[continuing chapter 10]

The Queen Mother of the West was not a giant, nor was she especially hideous.  In fact, for the most part she was a quite beautiful—if rather tall—woman, with long lovely black hair flowing down her back in an ebony river that seemed to have a soul of its own.

Unfortunately, that long black hair flowed all the way down her back to a tail.  A leopard's tail, to be specific, and one evidently bestowed on her as being emblematic of her temper.  Her mouth was open in anger, allowing Wen to see that her teeth, too, were feline.  Tiger, I believe, he found himself thinking.  Plus, she was floating above the treetops, another clue suggesting that, however mortal most of her might look, this was no mortal.

Well, he told himself, charm has worked before.  Occasionally.  He bowed, deeply, ending the gesture by bringing his forehead to the ground.  "Good day, Majesty," he said—inhaling an astonishingly sweet scent.  Wu Ming, he thought, might even kill for plants that smelled this way.  Raising his head, he added, "Rest assured we had, and have, no interest in your orchard or its fruits."  Hands to yourself, Fengzi.  "We are here solely to take possession of this gardener."

"He speaks the truth, Exalted One," the dog-headed officer said.  "His papers are in order.  It appears that the reason the gardener Wen Gang was without documents of direction is that his processing was botched at the entry to hell.  He has literally been a wandering spirit since then."

"He has done excellent work," boomed the goddess, "and I do not see why I should give him up.  Hungry ghosts make the very best gardeners: they are no more likely than wolves to eat fruit, and they're far easier to train.  This one in particular has been exceptionally biddable."

That was Father, thought Wen.  Biddable in the extreme, even after death.  Bending to everyone's wishes but his own.  I wonder, is his silence here due to the constriction of his throat, or can he just not make himself speak up for himself?

"I should deeply regret having to inconvenience you, Majesty," he said, "but I do have a charge to fulfill.  And my instructions are quite clear."  He reached for the papers, still held by the officer.

"Let me see that."  No, thought Wen.  Take us at our word, please.

Kowtowing, the officer raised the hand holding the papers.  The Queen Mother of the West gestured with a long, elegant, beautifully tipped finger, and the papers vanished from the officer's hand, reappearing in her own.  For a moment she read.

Then she snorted, what might almost be called a laugh, if one were desperate enough.  "Fool," she said to the officer.  "Are you so gullible, then?  This is clearly a forgery.  In fact, I would be willing to believe that there isn't a single legitimate character written on any of these pages.  And you were going to hand over my gardener on the basis of these?"  She dropped the papers; as she did she flicked a finger, and as each page fell to earth it puffed quietly, sparked like a star, and burst into flame.

"No!"  The word came out before Wen could stop himself.  Trapped, he thought; we're all trapped now.

Wait a minute: what's so horrible about being trapped in heaven?  "I'm sorry, Majesty," he said.  "I'm just going to have trouble explaining the loss of the pass."

"Are you?"  The Queen Mother of the West looked at him—into him—and Wen suddenly felt very small and weak.  So this is what life was like for Father, he thought.

She clapped her hands together, and the disintegrated documents reappeared between those hands.  "Let us see, then," she began.  "'This person'?"  She looked up from the pass at Wen, and again he felt reduced.  "I see you have managed to avoid having your name placed anywhere on any of these documents, Person."

"That was an administrative convenience," Wen said.  "We wanted the pass to be usable by any of us, should circumstances require it."

"No doubt."  The dryness of the Queen Mother's chuckle could create drought and famine anywhere in the Middle Kingdom, and especially in Fusang.  "You will, however, tell me your name, Person."

That means giving you control over me, thought Wen.  "Is that really necessary for the completion of my task, Majesty?"

"Xia..." Fengzi said quietly, in that Mother voice.  "You don't argue with the Queen Mother of the West."

"You should listen to your little Daoist, Person."  The goddess's voice had taken on the timber of thunder.  "I was not making a request or filing a petition with you."

Wen looked at Father.  Without the Goddess's acquiescence, he wasn't going to be able to rescue Father and end his curse.  Both of their curses.  But if he revealed his name, the fraudulence of his errand would be obvious.  And the fates of those who tried to cheat heaven or hell were gruesome enough; what would happen to a man who tried to cheat heaven and hell?

He felt his head droop.  There really wasn't any choice at all, and hadn't been since he'd ignored Yin Fengzi's warning.  "Majesty," he said, "this unworthy person is named Wen Xia.  Your gardener Wen Gang was—is—my father."

A roll of thunder caused the trees to shake.  Not a single peach dared drop, though.  Why does she even need a gardener, Wen asked silently.  "So you admit that these documents are all forgeries."

"Not at all, Majesty.  Yes, one of them is.  The document instructing any and all to hand Wen Gang over to us for reprocessing was created by me in order to facilitate removal of my father from this place.  The other documents were written by the appropriate authorities.  They were done, however, at my suggestion and based on information that I—well, that I made up.  On the spot, mostly."

"And you thought that you could just walk into heaven and walk out again with one of my servants, based on lies you made up 'on the spot, mostly'?"  The Queen Mother of the West began to drift downward.  The peach trees, Wen noticed, bent themselves back and away rather than allow themselves to touch even a fiber of her gown.  Wen began to shift back and away from the others.  Let her tear into me, he decided, since that seems to be my luck, but the others don't deserve punishment just because I was able to talk them into this.

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